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Last one of this series I'll post. I forgot to mention that none of

these have been printed. There is no processing on these at all. No

PS nothing. These are negative scans. I'll keep the comments in

mind when I print them.

same thoughts as the last post, neat idea though

Hello Mike, you ask me for some comments and I'll gladly make some, though my limited expertise is focused on capturing a moment and much less on what you do with it afterwards. What intertests me primarily is the impact value of a photo, and here I think that you have acheived that goal. Again, I'm sure that others can do better in advising on the technical side, my only critic would be to crop out a little of the background at the top, so as to bring the persons more into prominence. The expressions are excellent and that is what it is all about. Now some may tell you that the lighting here and there could be better, but I'm really not competent to say very much there. A joyful picture that has character.