philgeusebroek 0 Posted October 25, 2005 What could I do to improve this compostion? Please comment. Link to comment
vicki_miller 0 Posted October 25, 2005 Good use of bold color and sharp detail, but there's something lacking to the composition: a "path" for your eye to wander around. I think you've got two (or more) compositions here, and they are both fighting for the viewer's attention. Sometimes it even helps to turn your photo/painting, etc., upside down and look at it. Hope this helps. Vicki Link to comment
andrewmorrell 0 Posted October 25, 2005 Interesting effect - it looks like you're shooting through a window. It does reduce the effectiveness of the color, but it adds a surreal patina to the photo. Link to comment
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