2005 -part 2. The gloomy morning

All comments wellcome.

This picture has a lot of partly realized potential. It seems to be a statement of modern humans and the infliction of a life style over which they have little control. I like the determined look on the man's face, as though he were resigned to his fate. I like the interplay of windows, ramp and the window fog that partly hides the people. One compositional suggestion: try cropping out the top of the picture so that the white triangular window at upper left is lost. There is a strong movement from left to right in the picture but the bright triangle fights the eye to look back to it.

Thank you for so great comment!!! And may you are really right about top-left corner... I'll think about it... :)

Well captured! I like the framming and the moment.

Thank you! :)