Another Portrait by Gabriele Mandarelli

I'd like to have comments and ratings 4 this shot. Thanx.

Overall it's a nice photograph, but I would have liked it better if I could see your eyes as well!

if you're going to smoke, you should roll your own. Try Drum.

Since your eyes aren't a part of the image, a higher angle would have made good use of the pattern of tables for a background, rather than the random clutter of tables, trees, sky, etc.

you are a worthy subject... t

i would of stopped down (or is it up? ) to a lower f number and get a better affect with DOF. The bleachers in the background are distracting....

 

I like the composition of the shot but I too would have liked to see your eyes. I would have liked to see the background thrown out of focus with a wide lens to center attention on you.

If we could see your eyes. BTW - You really should quit smoking...