arraga 0 Posted October 4, 2005 Strong graphic design with a little rhytm thrown in. I feel that the centered composition is too static; maybe a 3/4 view (with the same pylons; not adding nor leaving out anything) would add some more dynamism. I'm pretty well aware that this could be impossible for practical reasons. It looks like a tightly cropped photo which barely leaves out wordly junk. And is not completely succesful; the lamp at the bottom can either be distracting, or a reminder of the outside world. I still don�t know if I would keep it or not. Link to comment
ndro777 0 Posted October 4, 2005 you know what? as soon as post the picture for critique, then i realized that bloody lamp at the bottom. i was too concern about getting the colour and contrast right that i didn't notice that lamp. anyway, a lesson for me. also, it is my intention to have this symmetrical composition. believe me i have to get my friend to drive me back and forth the bridge few times to get this shot! (it's a six lane freeway) thanks for the critique though...much appreciated. hendro Link to comment
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