Can of Olives

Constrcutive comments would be appreciated on this shot, as well as on

the others in the folder.

Thanks for your time,

Tom

yes, that would appear to be a can of olives. of course without the title I might first think it was a can of tomatoes. (e? or no e?)

and why is the man studying this can? why does the man appear to be wearing an ascot?

IMO the best of the folder. It's a rather crazy idea, and the guy adds a somewhat crazy touch. Would be better with can straight as then the lean of your models head would seem stronger. You could crop a slither from the top (just to tidy up the white square top right corner and gap between hair and top of frame).

Notice the way the arrow and ridges on the can lead right to his eyes? Well done.

wow, Dominique I'm glad your comment brought me back here. I scavenged a large pear can out of the school kitchen trash because it looked cool...but at the time I couldnt figure out what I had seen that made me think the pear can would be cool too. I think this is it. and now I am left wondering the actual size of the can in proportion to the man.

You are right about the groves and arrow leading directly to his eyes.