Jessica #2

Input please. Thanks a lot!! :)

Nice pose, framing and a perfect background would make a nice candid, even though such harsh lighting is not the ideal for portraits. I would suggest some proportional cropping to get rid of the post, which I find somewhat distracting, but my real gripe would be the focus, which is on the lower end of her ... legs! Same problem with the bee shot, although there it is coupled with too shallow a DOF. Perhaps the camera's autofocus was wandering? Watch out! :-)

I agree with the last post increase the DOF with a smaller aperature and slower shutter. Cropping needs to be a bit tighter as well fill the bottom of the shot with her feet.