elly1664876496 0 Posted September 8, 2005 was trying for a comic effect - thoughts? feelings? suggestions?
jzbeeaol.com 0 Posted September 9, 2005 I sort of get where you were trying to be comedic. Haunting is definitely there. It's a nice effect!
elly1664876496 0 Posted September 9, 2005 Thanks for your comments. It was more a comic book effect, not comedic hehehe. Cheers, Ellen
jana 1 Posted September 9, 2005 haunting... It is there, like from a Holywood film, not very subtle though.. cheers Jana
r 0 Posted September 12, 2005 I think you definately got the comic book feel just right - even has a bit of a story told by the ghostly light in the window. I'd suggest cropping off the left half of the photo tho, even tho I do like the inclusion of the fence, I think the haunting feel is coming mostly from the right. Plus, a portrait orrientation will increase our sence of being loomed over by the building. It also seems to amplify the effect of the jagged highlight at bottom right.
elly1664876496 0 Posted September 13, 2005 Thanks for stopping by - I always appreciate your feedback. And you have me pegged - I liked the fence too much to get rid of it! but yeah, I like your version. Cheers, El
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