middleage face

what do u think?

Charming photo. She looks young and beautiful, but I am old and not so beautiful. The treatment makes the eyes enchanting. The veil is just transparent enough to invite inquiry. One of the best portraits I've seen on PhotoNet for awhile

Probably I would have liked the image with a bit less on the upper part and a bit more on the lower.

But I love it anyway!5\6

Gorgeous lady! I'll be forty in April and I would LOVE to look that good! Nice work!

I stopped at that picture because of the colours and the woman's beauty but I have a few critiques:

1) On my monitor, I see an unflattering green cast going from her forehead to her ear. Maybe you can't see it on your own monitor because of a different calibration but it does not look too good from my side.

2) It looks like you've scanned a print as opposed to the negative. Not too much of a problem so far except that you have not cleaned up the dust & scratches, which I think spoils the finished result.

I hope my suggestion to retouch this shot on Photoshop will help you make it even better. Ciao for now.

dirsty scan?

If this shot was cleaned up it would be very nice. The blue tint on the forehead ruins it as well as the visible dust specs.

thank you everybody for your interesting critiques.

you help me to grow up. thank u again

Confermo sia la polvere nello scanner sia la parte verde sulla fronte.

Resta di fatto una splendida foto, molto interessante, bellissima modella e buon colpo d'occhio

Ciao

If it is true that our real age is written in our hearts, and if it is true that the eyes are windows to our hearts, then you managed to capture that fact, Claudi! The expression of joy, freshness, curiosity, and also that kind of non existing oversaturation and tiredness, are all in these eyes!

 

Great moment!