Jodie Model pose

shot this photo, first roll out of the camera had cheap material for

back ground. just wondering how to label this shot hi key or abstract

or just a good photo?

I would classify this photo as "over-exposed," "awkward," and "amateurish." Rule #1 of portrait photography is do not pose the model so a roll of fat appears that is not normally visible. Rule #2 is don't overexpose unless you're skilled in high-key portraits. And rule #3 is don't let the clothing be so distractingly different in terms of the shades it is rendered in.

Hi Mark, Good attempt. Your model's face is a tad overexposed, probably a result of on camera metering combined with a light backdrop. Try using the built in spot meter next time, or put the camera in manual mode and overexpose the shot by about 2 stops. To be a truly hi-key photo, you'll need Jodie to wear a light top. I think she would look good with a white top, as it will really excentuate her coloring. Try it again and post the results. good luck!

Well, I LIKE IT!!!!!! It may be a little overexposed in the face, but to me it is well done, otherwise. I disagree about it looking amateurish and my opinion is as good as anyone elses. I think it is a good photo. Lorraine Foster

I'm familiar with high-key work, but this doesn't quite capture it, I think. The dark clothing doesn't work with this shot as it accentuates the overexposure of the face. Also, what is that taupe color there in the triangle at the crook of the model's arm and under her hair? Just overexposed shadows? Anyway, it looks odd and distracts me. I like the highlight on the sleeve, but is looks odd on the other tone of the shoulder.

I think that the portrait is lacking also. It could be alot better if you framed as dynamically as the model was willing to pose, and got a better expression.

 

The setting and lighting is 'amateurish' for sure, but that doesn't mean that it can't be good. Don't listen to anyone's comments, and keep plowing ahead.

Amy, Amy, Amy! get a grip girl! First roll! (even though you're right, give a few brownie points for enthusiasm, how 'bout it?) I think your biggest problem is an on camera flash. For starters try a bounce flash with a white card taped to the top of it (so it kicks a little into the eyes when it's pointed straight up). Use a low white ceiling. Then come back and you'll get more... t