My Niece and Nephew

We had a pool party in August for my Grandmother's and Nephew's

birthdays. Here are my nephew and his sister in front of the

birthday cake.

out of focus- using flash would have helped with the camera shake, and using a slightly smaller aperature would have given you more depth of field while blacking out the background.

If you want the cake in the frame, put it in the frame, otherwise, get rid of the ugly box. Heck, get rid of the ugly box anyway and keep the cake in the frame.

If the young girl moves to the left or right just a little bit, or if you move left or right and have each of them turn their heads a little bit, you can get all of her face (or at least all of her smile) into the image.