A late afternoon view of the Koolau Mountains

I would appreciate your input. Thanks.

Good eye on the shaft of light. That's a really tricky exposure situation. Did you bracket it? I wonder how it would have looked stopped down 1/2 to 1 full stop? You'd lose some of the shadow detail but you could probably get a lot of that back in post processing. 4/5

Agree with the comment above. Wondered about an alternate tonal balance. For your consideration...

Thank you for your advice. I've adjusted the hue and saturation the best I could using PaintShopPro.