leighperry 0 Posted August 27, 2005 Clever shot Aaron. I like it a lot. The radial arrangement countered by the direction of the shadows works well. Even the sliver of white sky adds another radial line. Well done. Link to comment
sef1664877429 0 Posted August 27, 2005 Look at those poor, lonely posts, doesn't look like they have any wires joining them... tragic. Any suggestion that the posts were the first thing that I saw in this will be strenuously... em... Great perspective, changes of contrast between the layers, and what Leigh said about the sky. A very celtic foreground, standing stones in the shape of star constellations. The lines are highways to ancient gods. Link to comment
AaronFalkenberg 0 Posted August 27, 2005 Thank you both for your comments. Leigh, the white sliver is actually another field. I really had my doubts about including it or not, but felt the top was a little empty without it. I'm glad you see it fits in the composition. cheers, Aaron Link to comment
eric_fredine 0 Posted September 2, 2005 I like this one Aaron - I'd agree with both Leigh's and Stephen's comments. The B&W really emphasizes the graphic nature of hte composition - probably more so than in colour. And for some reason I am endlessly fascinated by fence posts in water so I appreciate them here. And the stones and their shadows just seem oh so perfect! The thin line at the top bugs me somewhat - but cropping it up sort of compromises the fence posts. Link to comment
AaronFalkenberg 0 Posted September 3, 2005 I showed a test print of this to Leon, he thought you might like it. Is your reception by invitation only? Link to comment
eric_fredine 0 Posted September 3, 2005 Aaron - Everyone is welcome to the reception - and I'd be delighted if you could attend. Thanks, Eric Link to comment
hugo tuffen 0 Posted December 20, 2005 the perspective, the shadows of the stones, the tones: everything is spot-on here and it's a very original idea. i'm also unsure about the white line at the top. great portfolio, i'm enjoying & being inspired..cheers, hugo Link to comment
Jack McRitchie 150 Posted April 30, 2006 Quite an eye to see this. Beautifully realized. Include it in your next show. Link to comment
AaronFalkenberg 0 Posted April 30, 2006 Jack, thanks. If I recall, you recently had a show. What was the theme, and how did it go? cheers, Aaron Link to comment
Jack McRitchie 150 Posted April 30, 2006 Show coming up in a week. The theme is the neighborhood in which I live. What else! :) Link to comment
fernando monreal 0 Posted August 12, 2006 Great composition excercise, and great photo. f. Link to comment
emilia gheorghe 0 Posted September 19, 2006 I think the white line at the top offers continuity and balances nicely the composition... Very consistent portofolio! Keep posting and I'll keep admiring! Link to comment
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