Sarah M.

Great shot with a nostalgic 70's feel. I think it would be slightly improved by moving the tree a little to the left.

 

Best wishes, Jonathan

Thank you for the comments. I agree with the spacing issue. Amazing what you DON'T see when looking right at it.

Your constructive comments always welcomed.

Hi !

Nice photo !

Oposite to Jonathan, I would move the model to the right !?

Cheers,

Marc

 

the light, the tone, the setting are all really wonderful. i think everyone who's commented thus far has a composition issue. the really cool thing is that either the tall tree or the model seem to be controlling the clouds in the sky. the tree points and the clouds march; likewise, sarah opens her arms and the same happens. whether sarah and the big tree should separate, i cannot say. i think i would chop the two shorter tree tops off first and see what happens.