cappoldt 0 Posted August 23, 2005 Very nice as usual, Miles! Only suggestion would be to burn/darken the lower-right corner of sheets, leaving her face as the brightest point in the image, focusing the attention there. Link to comment
claudio ghizzoni 0 Posted August 24, 2005 beautiful frame, great moment, natural light and gorgeus model. only one difect, the cutting arms.it doesn'matter it's always a beautiful picture Congratulation Link to comment
ghuczek 0 Posted August 24, 2005 The lighting on the face is wonderful. A closeup of the face might have been interesting. I agree with previous comments about the bottom right corner. Much too light. It needs to be burned down. Unusual posing. Very relaxed and full of expression. Link to comment
roim 0 Posted August 24, 2005 Dear Mr. Morgan.....what a shot!! You have a lot of Satoshi Saikusa on your images....natural and perfect. Take a look at his work www.satoshisaikusa.com, it might be a great reference for you. congrats!! Link to comment
miles1 0 Posted August 25, 2005 Thank you to everyone for your comments. Really it should be darkened in the right corner to be "correct" however this is unmanipulated and don't you think it might detract from her face and is it really necessary that we see the pattern on the sheets? dREAMS* I really like your work too, I have looked at it before and think your use of lighting is fantastic. FAUSTO I enjoyed your portfolio and thanks for the tip, it's always interesting to compare work with others, your "Fashion Brazil" folder has a slightly Avedon look to it, very nice! Cheers all, Miles. Link to comment
cappoldt 0 Posted August 26, 2005 Miles, the detail in the sheets isn't the idea - rather that the eye not be pulled anywhere but to where you specifically want it to go. I'll offer that it's a nit-pick, but with the pose forming triangles on the left, taking you to her stomach, to the traingle formed by her arms, taking you to her face, from a compositional standpoint it's the only improvement I can see needed - you're right there at the edge of flawless:) Great job! Link to comment
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