Critique please

[jodi_schlosser]

I am still learning and seeing things after the shot (horrible horizons) but

could you please tell me what I should be working on!

 

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[thomas_hardy1]

I like your BW photos with the background blurred.

 

look here:

 

http://rangefinderforum.com/forums/showthread.php?t=41941

[twmeyer]

You have posted way too many images in a <i>discussion</i> forum. Load these into your <a href="http://www.photo.net/shared/community-member?user_id=2384237">profile page</a>, and then post them in the <a href="http://www.photo.net/bboard/forum?topic_id=1481">critique forum</a>. Then ask people to visit those images and give their criticism in the <i>critique</i> forum... t

[giggles]

Your exposure look off on many of them as there are some blown out area. The best shots in my opinion are the BW feet and the last shot. I think you are good at capturing the "moment" and have great ideas but you need to work on your camera settings. When in this predictment, an easy way to check your shots is to use your histogram and check it after every shot.

[joe heiliger houston, tx]

Shoot at a better time of day... late in the evening (last 1.5hrs of the day), or earlier in the morning. That will get rid of the squints... Your other option is to find some "full shade" areas and work there.

 

As said, some of your exposures are hot.

 

 

Joe

[david_m]

Too many rear-view photos. Some completely out of focus. NEVER photograph people who are squinting (looking into the sun). Only post your BEST shots. There are a few good shots so keep trying and learning.