jpbarilguerard Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 More experiments... any thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jpbarilguerard Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 Another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jpbarilguerard Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 ...another... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jpbarilguerard Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 ...and another... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jpbarilguerard Posted February 23, 2005 Author Share Posted February 23, 2005 A last. I'm stopping, promised. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d_price Posted February 23, 2005 Share Posted February 23, 2005 Actually I think they look pretty good. The only one I think I don't care for would be the 2nd one, he looks a bit uncomfortable. I'm partial to the last one, it looks very good. Seems like he may need a bit more detail in the hair. The whole set seems a bit like a Hilfiger ad. Although I don't have any in my portfolio here, I actually have shot people. LOL. Mostly with film though and I've neglected to scan them, but I'm buying a new computer this weekend!! Anyway, congrats, you've got some good work there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dogbert Posted February 25, 2005 Share Posted February 25, 2005 I think the lighting and look and clothing of the model are good. Some of the poses are better than others and some of the framing in one a two of the shots are a little disconcerting to me. No doubt you will have shots that you prefer to others too. I think the main thing that bothers me is the muslin. You have tried to create a fashion type photo shoot, but I think the background seems more typical of a formal portrait. This guy with this look should be out on the city streets, in an office or nightclub or something. The hip poses, clothes and expressions on the models face don't quite work with the background which indicates a formal studio shot. Other shots I've seen with this kind of look in a studio have an all white background, working the Zen minimalist thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d_price Posted February 26, 2005 Share Posted February 26, 2005 I agree with Geoff about the locations. Try doing another shoot but at some of those locations. Mabye a downtown location, something more urban and trendy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frank granovski Posted February 27, 2005 Share Posted February 27, 2005 They were all very good except the last 2. You should try some with a different backdrop and/or get him to change his shirt. A little red somewhere would be good but not with a green shirt and backdrop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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