photographer lori Posted October 17, 2006 Share Posted October 17, 2006 Was wondering if you would take a look. It's my first try at desiging an album. I am using Zookbinders 10 x 10 album. Does it flow...tell the story....anything out of place or odd? thanks! http://www.photo.net/photos/Photographer%20Lori<div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
photographer lori Posted October 17, 2006 Author Share Posted October 17, 2006 Here is the link...hope it works this time... <a href="http://www.photo.net/photos/Photographer%20Lori">My Photonet Gallery</a> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cariad Posted October 17, 2006 Share Posted October 17, 2006 Hi Lori, very nice work, I love it. From the design you must be using Asuka books :) Would you share what font you used? I love it............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyh Posted October 17, 2006 Share Posted October 17, 2006 Very nicely done! It flows very well. I'm sure the couple is going to love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rosey1 Posted October 18, 2006 Share Posted October 18, 2006 Very impressive! you did great for a first timer. keep 'em coming! cheers! rosey b. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elisheva_werner_reiss1 Posted October 18, 2006 Share Posted October 18, 2006 Good morning I'm a beginner, and didn't do a full album yet. Here are my 2 cents: I really loved your album, both pictures and design. In 2 places I had minor problems with the flow: 1. Wasn't the garter toss immediatly after the flower toss? Even if not, consider if they don't conseptually belong together. 2. The double page of dancing (which I really love), is using as background a picture that was displayed few pages before (or very similar one). [it's a lovely image, but it made me stop and look back to see if I was right that it was used before, so it stopped the flow of the album]. I would also put the 2 spreads of dancing one after the other. I hope my comments help, if not, just ignore them :-) Good luck, Elisheva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cariad Posted October 18, 2006 Share Posted October 18, 2006 Elishiva, if this album is a Asuka book the last double page would be the cover of the book, so it is perfectly ok to use a picture that has been featured in the album :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Gardner Posted October 18, 2006 Share Posted October 18, 2006 Lori, I like it....one thing though...on the flower toss, take out the shot on the left. Flair through the face...not good. Dave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elisheva_werner_reiss1 Posted October 19, 2006 Share Posted October 19, 2006 Steffi - You are right, I didn't know the last double page is going to be the cover, but it's not the double page I referred to. I was talking about the 3rd on the last row (2 from last) and the 4th on the row before (3rd row). Thanks, Elisheva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cariad Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 I guess Lori is not going to share what font she used :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
photographer lori Posted October 20, 2006 Author Share Posted October 20, 2006 Zapfino is the font! :) I thought I posted a response already! Thanks for the feedback. I am excited to see the final product. I am using Zookbinders. LORI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cariad Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 Good choice Lori, Zookbinders is great :) Thank you for the font name..........I love pretty fonts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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