Website critique wanted

Discussion in 'Website Creation' started by johncox, Jan 3, 2011.

  1. Does anyone have suggestions to make this feel more organic?
    My software right now is MS Office (for text editing), photoshop (for images) and Apple IWeb 09.
    www.theworldexposed.com
    Also, does anyone have a good idea what the optimum file size for the images sizes I have in the gallery and on the main page would be?
    Any feedback is great,
    thanks
    John.
     
  2. I like the design. It's simple and elegant and loads quickly. These are some quick observations:

    • Some words are inconsistently capitalized, as in these links "The Idea - contact - Photos" (I would capitalize Contact for consistency; the same for "The work of John Cox" (I would capitalize Work); and "He specializes in Black and white images..." (I would make black lowercase).
    • I wouldn't use this: "He works with digital SLRs and has fully embraced the digital age." It seems to me unnecessary.
    • I wouldn't publish my home address.
     

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