Does this layout for a wedding book work?

Okay, first time posting a question on a forum here, although I have had my fair

share of replies and comments.

 

I only recently began to offer Asuka Books, and recently opened an account. I

am very new at design, and I'm curious if this works for an opening page set.

Specifically, does it tell a story or does it look like a confused and random

thought? This is just one page, and I will eventually have a page dedicated to

wedding books once I complete the entire book, but I wanted this displayed next

to some of the other photos for critique purposes. Thanks in advance for any

thoughts you may have. (By the way, it is the first image at the link below.)

 

http://www.toddcwilsonphotography.com/WeddingI/index.html

I like it!

First page looks good, but the rest?

I love it!

Was this shot digital? First page was excellent.

Yes Bob, it was shot digital.

Thanks for the kind words. This part of the wedding workflow is new to me. My photoshop experience in the past was mostly related to work as a private investigator, NO creativity with evidence, just basic sharpening and contrast, resizing, and static storyboards. I just got stuck looking at one page and couldn't decide if I liked it or not. I'm nearing the finished book and will be presenting it to the couple as an offering and didn't want to look in hindsight and wish I hadn't. Thanks again.

if not into designing yourself yet on PS, you can try this also:

http://kubotaimagetools.com/beforeandafter/AAV2-1.html

 

or http://www.pixelcreatorpro.com/

 

it will help you out...