Old lace factory

First attempt at Black and white in a long while. In the photo is an old lace factory in east Ayrshire, Scotland.

Note: I have since cloned out the white pipe next to bridge. However that file is sitting on my Pc and not on my phone which I'm using to post this.

Very good photo. I can feel the gloomy and gloomy atmosphere.

I don't know what you're looking for, but I would work a bit more on editing, not just on the pipeline but on the depth. It would increase the contrast in the nearby areas and decrease it in the later areas. I would like the catwalk to invite me in. It would also make it a bit more dramatic.

Maybe this way?... ? (I overemphasized it to make it easier to see)

Very good photo. I can feel the gloomy and gloomy atmosphere.

I don't know what you're looking for, but I would work a bit more on editing, not just on the pipeline but on the depth. It would increase the contrast in the nearby areas and decrease it in the later areas. I would like the catwalk to invite me in. It would also make it a bit more dramatic.

 

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Maybe this way?... ? (I overemphasized it to make it easier to see)

As I mentioned I have a in progress copy on my pc so I will try your suggestions.