omar_cruz Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 <p>Hi for everyone!!!!!!!!!!!<br> I create my new web site and I would like your opinions. I love photography and that is my first step. I am not professional; I am a boy with a dream. Your opinion is <em><strong>very, very, very</strong></em>, important to me.<br> www.crutos.com<br> Thanks’</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sknowles Posted October 25, 2010 Share Posted October 25, 2010 <p>Thanks for sharing. It's interesting. My immediate reaction is have some walk through the pages for the grammar. Plurals are lower case and don't use aprostrophes. Peace is a noun, peaceful is an adjective. The "arts" are protected "by copyright laws", not "with." It's "Hi everyone" and not "Hi for everyone." It's "Premium stock photos or custom made", not "make." Ok, picky, picky, picky. I wish you luck.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kah_hoe_wan Posted October 26, 2010 Share Posted October 26, 2010 <p>your website has to many things going on. less is more. take a look at other professional photographers website for inspiration. i know this don't help much that is because it's hard to comment on what is not working from the start.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert_k1 Posted October 29, 2010 Share Posted October 29, 2010 <p>http://www.luminous-landscape.com/forum/index.php?topic=41252</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lisa_bree Posted November 1, 2010 Share Posted November 1, 2010 <p>I think you should pay an English speaker to fix things up. Find a student and trade if you can't afford a pro.<br> An e-mail address from yahoo is not cool. <br> The white space...and the grey space... drifting around there...not good...<br> This web-site really doesn't work. Sorry! <br> I think you'd be better off going with a ready made site such as wordpress (.org if you want to advertise). They look good and they work. You can customize it in so many different ways, that with a bit of effort, it'll look like you want it to.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gdegerman Posted November 2, 2010 Share Posted November 2, 2010 <p>Why do you have ads on the site?</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sondip_biswas Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 www.sondip.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcconnellphotos Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 <p>It's suffering from over-design. Looks like you're trying to show off your design skills, rather than give user a good experience.<br> You emphasise that our opinion is very very very important to you; do you think that's exactly what's holding you back? That website looks like it's been built to impress someone. Why do you care?<br> Steven</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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