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<p>I prefer blogs that take the effort to compose, punctuate, and spell properly. The capitalization of random words, the sentence fragments, the use of "u" instead of "you", "@" instead of "at" -- these all bug me. The photographs are fine, nothing spectacular IMO (but neither are mine). I'm annoyed at having to scroll all the way to the bottom just to go to the next or previous pages. If your true interest is in the images, scrap the text and make it a gallery, not a blog. Words are important in a blog, they're not just glue to put between some of the pics.</p>
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<p>Check it again Zane sorry for my grammar maybe I should pay more attention to it. I guess I should write the way I was taught through years of private schooling by very tedious and great teachers. The whole texting culture and way of life has taken a toll on my writing hahaha. Thank for your advice. </p>
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<p>Zane is much too gentle.</p>

<p>"Follow me as I walk through this life documenting my Creative Eye's View of the World..."<br>

The only way you could make that sentence more pretentious would be to print it using a small-cap type face. Which you did.<br>

(Can you get your money back on any of that private schooling?)</p>

<p>Stick to pictures.</p>

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<p>Why Thank you Mr. Peterson what are you a Professor @ Harvard? I guess you have nothing better to do then to be a Rude Old Man or is that what you do? My blog is not a blog about being a master of writing. It's about photography. All I was doing was asking for your thoughts and advice and Yeah you gave them to me and I thank you for them really. Perhaps you are a kind of guy that doesn't have a heart. It sure seems like it to me. Would you laugh in a homeless person's face on a cold snowy windy day when he asks you for a nickel for a cup a joe? It's alright it's quite alright if you would that's your problem. I guess you are opinionated and that's great it's your right to be. Do you think you have all the answers and know it all? See the sad thing is let's say one day I'm walking down Market street in San Francisco and I'm holding the door for an elderly lady with a walker who is shopping by herself. You are the guy who couldn't care less and you rush through the same door and you don't even look back. The lady falls to the ground breaks her ankle. I see all of it happen right before my eyes. I drive her to the hospital find out her name is Betty and she has 5 kids and 12 grandchildren. She lives in Modesto and rode a bus just to walk the streets of San Francisco. She likes to relive her younger days and go to the pier and think about the day she met her husband there 50 years earlier. Her husband passed away in the spring time due to a battle with cancer.Where are you? You are in the check out line with a couple of TV dinners and a Handle of Scottish Clan Whiskey and the only thing you can think about is what's on channel 7 @ 9 O'clock. I'm not mad or upset from your remarks Mr. Peterson. I don't know you and I most likely will never meet you. All I ask is Where is your Heart? Do you have one? or are you going to reply back explaining all of the grammar mistakes you found in this post just so you can feel like you are right?</p>

 

 

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<p>All I ask is Where is your Heart?</p>

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<p>No, I've never taught at Harvard. I did teach at U.C. Berkeley for a few years, but that was long ago.</p>

<p>I have lots of things to do, but I still manage to find time to be a "Rude Old Man" now and then.</p>

<p>As to heart: Would it really be kinder, when watching someone make a fool of them self, to be quiet and just let them continue? If so, please carry on.</p>

 

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<p>Well all I can say is that I'll be sure to write with pride from this moment forward. Life is all about lessons and how we learn from them. Your post did make me realize that I should carry myself to the best of my ability. I would like to be known and remembered as a man who cared. How can I care if I'm not being the best I know I can be in every way? Right? Writing is an art as I'm sure you know you already know. Like how there is an art to conversation with speech. It's just another way to express yourself. Hahaha I wonder who is going to have the last remark on this thread. I hope nothing but the best Mr. Peterson. Honestly I am a peacegiver not a fighter even I am Irish. I save my fight for for battle of life not war.</p>
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