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Rather a slow load, but well worth it once it came up. Nice pictures!

 

Your models are lovely, but you might want to diversify your selection of models and apparel if you are targeting more than just the Indian-American market.

 

There is also one statement on the "About Us" section that I would definitely change:

 

"Having already infiltrated the wedding sector..."

 

"Infiltrate" means to covertly insert clandestine operators into an organization or country:

 

http://www.answers.com/topic/infiltrate

 

It's not the word you want to use. ;^<)>

 

How about:

 

"Complimenting our success in the wedding sector..."

 

Later,

 

Paulsky

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Overall your work looks solid. The bracketed photography and videography at the top of your home page do nothing. I'd remove them. Also, with the exception of your area code, I see no clue as to where you are located and where you work. Also, the grammar in your about section needs some work. Read it aloud to yourself when you proof it. Overall though I like your site.

 

Paul

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Nice site - good use of flash for once! I'm looking at your site on a 1280x800 resolution laptop and struggle with the height of the site. It doesn't look like the type of site that should need a vertical scroll bar. Just a thought.

 

As Paul Sokal mentions above I would consider changing the {Photography} bits at the top. In fact it looks like you have a couple of possibly conflicting things going on. It looks like you have two logos and two straplines, I like the {b}utterfly logo but not the graphic on the right. I also like the words Photography and Videography but without the brackets - they feel like the natural strapline that should sit under {b}utterfly to me?

 

Creative Media Solutions sounds more like a web/new media service and confuses me - I would drop it personally.

 

You've probably already noticed the type on the facebook bit - check your company spelling.

 

Personally I prefer more transparent prices, "packages" suggests you will see packages and prices, this might be how US sites tend to work - not sure (I'm a Brit).

 

What a great site though - with great photos. I wish you every success with it!

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<p>Not to be too much of the grammar police, Paulsky, the use of the word 'Compliment' means to say something that expresses praise. Whereas the other form of the homophone, Complement is the correct word to use, meaning: to make complete or perfect, or thereabouts.</p>

<p>Sorry mate, couldn't resist the irony.</p>

<p>Troy</p>

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When I loaded it, my virus scanner said it stopped a virus. You may want to double check the page code, your computer for viruses, & the web host for viruses. Hopefully it was just a false alarm with my ETrust Antivirus. Hopefully the web host or your site hasn't been hacked and infected.

 

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HTML/Ofinpa.A is a detection of HTML files that have been modified by Win32/Ofinpa.A

 

Infected HTML files contain appended code that attempts to connect to the domain ntkrnlpa.info and download and execute a file. At the time of publication, this link returned an empty file.

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When I loaded it, my virus scanner said it stopped a virus. You may want to double check the page code, your computer for viruses, & the web host for viruses. Hopefully it was just a false alarm with my ETrust Antivirus. Hopefully the web host or your site hasn't been hacked and infected.

 

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HTML/Ofinpa.A is a detection of HTML files that have been modified by Win32/Ofinpa.A

 

Infected HTML files contain appended code that attempts to connect to the domain ntkrnlpa.info and download and execute a file. At the time of publication, this link returned an empty file.

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