john_thomas17

<blockquote> <p>The message is fine for your intended audience, but you might consider hiring an editor, or consulting with another copywriter, to help convey the desired tone for a predominantly English speaking audience.</p> </blockquote> <p>I guess that, unlike me, you're a native English speaker. The text sounds odd to you?</p> <p>Btw, thanks for your intention about breaking captions.</p>

<blockquote> <p>I guess you are asking about feedback on photos, not text but I will go for it anyway. You might tone down some patronizing and belittling language like:<br /> " Philosophy sets up a system of thought which in most cases bears little relationship to life.",<br /> " It is impossible for human logic to find the truths of Christianity."<br /> "So people who don’t know God don’t know anything at all, and this spiritual darkness can be eternal!"</p> </blockquote> <p>Aha! Good to know. Thanks a lot! No problem. ANY feedback is appreciated. I'll try to see what can I do because sometimes the text is quoted. However I think that because I write "<em>based on...</em>" I can soften sometimes the expression here and there. Is not my intention to (intellectually) kill someone rather to make him alive. :-)</p>

<blockquote> <p>Some of the captions break oddly, forcing the viewer to another page to finish reading.</p> </blockquote> <p>Can you give a link to look into?</p> <p>Thanks a lot for the appreciation. </p>

<blockquote> <p>How do you turn off the slide show?</p> </blockquote> <p>By going on the thumbnails row and clicking on a thumbnail. But I think that you're right. We must find a better way to stop/start it. </p> <p>By the way, all the photos are myself. :)</p> <p>Thanks for the feedback.</p>

<blockquote> <p>I found it confusing at first and normally, I wouldn't waste my time trying to figure out what's going on. Then, you have the photos with the captions on the left and then a pop up with the same text.</p> </blockquote> <p>We're looking into that. Basically, one can have a photo report like these ones...<br> http://asceticexperience.com/portfolio/heavens-joy/<br> http://asceticexperience.com/portfolio/circular-world/<br> http://asceticexperience.com/portfolio/spiritual-meaning-christs-cave-us/</p> <p>...where the description of each photo can be/is different from the leading text of the entire photo report. It is rather a thinking problem from our side. We'll try to solve that.</p> <p>Thanks for appreciation!</p>

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