joe_marshall4

<p>I think I'm going to scrap and rewrite the whole about-us page, more about how much we love weddings, and how I'm obsessed with photography, less other stuff...<br> Stay tuned for another request for help! Thanks for your willingness so far!</p>

<p>Thanks for pointing this out William, originally when we first started, my wife was photographing with me, she didn't have the passion to really study and learn the craft, so I stopped inlcuding her in packages and now hire someone when I book with 2 photographers. <br> She does do a ton of editing, advertising, preparation, taxes, and assisting, so it's definitely 'we' when it comes to the business being 'ours', but 'I' when it comes to the photographing.<br> The heading on the about page was something I had overlooked when we changed her role, I have it fixed it already. This is why I love getting feedback! </p> <p>I love your analogy with the storefront, I do go after brides, but so many were budget shoppers below my price range that I thought I would try to show where we start in the pricing scale. I like your advice and I deleted it from this page, if they are really searching for pricing they can easily find it, and now I think the page reads smoother too. Thank you again.</p>

<p>Thanks for the comments William and Aleks! I really appreciate it.<br> The pricing thing was because so many emailed asking: what is your prices... You're right, since I have a pricing page on the menu I can skip it on the main page. I think I like that. Less Tacky.<br> Thanks for pointing that out in the about page. I need to revise this. Also, my wife doesn't actually shoot with me, she's an assistant. I have trouble when I want to say 'we offer this' or 'we do that' when really it should be "I offer this" since I'm the one doing the work. <br> Is it ok to say 'we' even if I am the only shooter? (unless they add a second photog package)<br> Thanks again!</p>

<p>Hi All!<br> This is my first post here, but I'm excited to get involved!<br> I have created a website for our wedding photography in Wichita, KS. I'd be honored if you would take a look and let me know what your comments/critiques are. I am very willing to change things! I was getting some good traffic, but recently it has dropped off, so I'm worried about my SEO not being up to snuff. I'm reading up on the info on this forum for help too!<br> Here's our site: <a href="http://www.marshallphotographyks.com/weddings">www.marshallphotographyks.com/weddings</a><br> Thank you!</p>